Thursday, September 13, 2007

Copy Edit The World

Update: I included the rest of my edit the world material in this section.

"Destro" should be "Destroy"


"You can't move and you neither you.." The extra "you" is an error.


"ower" should be "over"


UPDATE HERE :)

Flesh Drink? Nothing as good as bone marrow smoothie! (should be fresh drink).


Everyone cool poops in their hands while rocking out with Elmo. (Crap should be Clap).


Batman has identity issues. (Superman should say Batman).


No SMMking, but smoking is ok. (Smmking should be smoking)

1 comment:

camccune said...

Excellent job on Copy Edit the World!
Good for 12 points.